what im doing today

hey yall, i am going to try and rework the william/ mother scene and incorporate some transitions into the piece. the initial scene had william explain that the model t factory turned into a munitions plant. without that it is confusing why the father says he works there and then you see the mother working there. also, i am aiming to "dehokify" the inital greeting between the two. after meeting with ashley and julie- which i think is happening tomorrow after our meeting- we can write more transitional segments. i printed out the directors questions and will address them as i work. just wanted to keep in touch. see you tomorrow and thanks, s